Amber's Story: Part 2

Apr 15, 2012 By Asia, 13

[Continued from Part 1 of the story HERE]

“What?” I asked very surprised “You need to talk to dad?” I emphasized the last word rather loudly. “Yes” she replied. “I’ll go get him” I said and ran up the stairs to dad’s room “Dad, mom is here, and she said she needs to talk to you” I tell him.

“Oh.....” he says, I could tell he was looking for words, “Tell your mother I’m busy” he said at last “I am NOT falling for that one” my mom calls upstairs. My dad looks up as if he hopes an angel of God will come down and rescue him. 

We sit down in the large living room that is filled with our new furniture “Um...Amber, sweetie, I’m sorry, but I’d like to talk to your father privately” says my mother quietly “Amber has as much of a right to be in this room as you, Kate!” flashes my father “It’s Ok, dad, I can leave” I say, hoping my parents won’t fight about it. I walk upstairs and go to my room, which is directly over the living room.

I kneel down on the floor and put my ear to the ground, “No, Kate! I need Amber in my life” I hear dad say “Mark, be sensible, you never spend any time with Amber as it is, I found out from Amber that no matter how many times she tries to talk to you, you push her away or say you are busy” replies my mom sharply “What?!” exclaims dad. “I need more time with Amber, Mark, I am moving up here, my boss said that we need someone to manage Walmart up here, and he gave me the job.” says my mom. I can tell that she is on the verge of tears. “Kate” my dad says quietly “Amber’s room is right above us” then I hear whispering and I can tell there is going to be a long discussion downstairs and they aren’t going to raise their voices again.

* * *

An hour later I hear my parents' feet coming up the stairs. “Amber,” says my father “Your mother is going to fight for you, she wants to spend more than two months a year with you.” My dad looks terrible and like he’s just been shot by his best friend, he looks so sad that I couldn’t even bring myself to look at him. 

* * *

When I woke up this morning I knew what today was, the trial. I had a shower then dried my hair. I think about calling mom to tell her I don’t feel good, and don’t want to go to the trial. No, I can’t do that! I want to be able to spend more time with mom as well. So I went to my closet and pulled out a purple shirt and a sparkly black half-sweater. I chose my favorite pair of jeans and slipped on a pair of black flip-flops. Then I lay back on my bed, ‘Why me?’ I don’t want to have to think about this any more. I go downstairs to get breakfast and then I hear dad’s footsteps coming down the stairs. “Dear,” he says “huh?” I mumble quietly “We have to leave in half an hour” “Ok” I reply.

[Story Concludes In Part 3]

 
greta   23 weeks ago

love your story
ASIA

Annika93   47 weeks ago

can't wait to read part 3 of this story!

Annika93   47 weeks ago

I really loved this story!

Annika93   47 weeks ago

I hope this isn't a true story because it's sad.

adrianac   1 year ago

awwww

jayceed2   1 year ago

I LOVE this story!!! can't wait to read # 3 in like 3 min!!! :) :) this is REALLY good!!!

meghank2   1 year ago

It hard to think that her parent argue over her and she wants both of them I feel bad.

bryceb2   1 year ago

the same kind of thing happened to me i know what ur going through

JENNAH H_C   1 year ago

mazin'

Ella   1 year ago

Oh poor Amber....

taylarv2   1 year ago

i hope its fictional.... :(

austinm3   1 year ago

I would hate that if my parents fought over me. I feel bad for amber

katieg3   1 year ago

That is so sad. Why are her parents fighting over Amber? Poor Amber!

ashwinp   1 year ago

Wow, I hope this won't be a true story, cause it would be devastating! Hopefully in the next part, it won't be anything to bad, because part 2 just changed the story up with the family all sad!

jackl2   1 year ago

i really liked the story

pratikk   1 year ago

I am happy I do not live in Ambers life.

ashwinp   1 year ago

I think this story is very good, but i think i am predicting a tragic ending. Man i cant wait for part 3! Its going to be really cool!

sophiao   1 year ago

This is a really good story so far and really makes me want to keep reading! They stop at the worst times! the suspense is killing me!

parkert2   1 year ago

I like this story

darinm2   1 year ago

thats is so sad poor amber

jordanm   1 year ago

i like this story

brigitgr   1 year ago

Oh my goodness that must have been so hard for her. I have been in court because of the adoption and trust me it is not fun.

adella   1 year ago

I hope this isn't a true story. It would be sad if it was.

adella   1 year ago

I just love your story.

Shizah   1 year ago

I really liked it. Nice sory and you are right Hummingbird22 that thare are errors in punctuation. Otherwise well Done!!!!

asiainasia   1 year ago

yeah, sorry, Im not so good at punctuation, but I like writing.

OliviaAnna   1 year ago

I absolutely love this story, but I also have a sense that it might have a tragic ending. It really sounds like the mom and the dad might have a horrific breakup and the kid Amber... well it doesn't look good at all.
I noticed some things about the story written by Asia. In all it truly was an amazing story, but the punctuation choices could have been better.

garrettw   1 year ago

pretty good story

Hummingbirdy22   1 year ago

I loved this story so far!!! WRITE PART III SOON!!! The only thing I thought could have been done better is the punctuation. Otherwise, it was AWESOME! :D

jakep2   1 year ago

Me too.

Hanakin   1 year ago

I'm looking forward to Part III! I LOVE your writing style!

screen (not verified)   1 year ago

me 2

hannahj   1 year ago

suspensful...

FARAHROX   1 year ago

I love it. Can't wait till 3

fayzeh233   1 year ago

Do part 3 it's good

Gates   1 year ago

is there a part 4?

simruns   1 year ago

Wow that was a sad story.

hopeg2   1 year ago

Great story makes you want to read more in the story versus not reading the rest! That was very good.

yuiy2   1 year ago

I like it:)

abigailh   1 year ago

I love your story and I can't wait to read part 3!

jackl2   1 year ago

did it say there was gonna be a part 3

jillian22805   1 year ago

part 2 is the only one i read. am very new.

asiainasia   1 year ago

Im glad you guys like it

Raptorman2012   1 year ago

Amazing description!!!

Clara Roberts   1 year ago

VERY NICE! Such a dramatic, creative story!

Rachel Catherine   1 year ago

Great job! I read part one and I can't wait for the conclusion. Keep up the great work! :)

zoie (not verified)   1 year ago

The ending should have been more

asiainasia   1 year ago

This isn't the ending

marian winslow   1 year ago

nice!

adella   1 year ago

So far so good.

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