Amber's Story: Part 2
[Continued from Part 1 of the story HERE]

“What?” I asked very surprised “You need to talk to dad?” I emphasized the last word rather loudly. “Yes” she replied. “I’ll go get him” I said and ran up the stairs to dad’s room “Dad, mom is here, and she said she needs to talk to you” I tell him.
“Oh.....” he says, I could tell he was looking for words, “Tell your mother I’m busy” he said at last “I am NOT falling for that one” my mom calls upstairs. My dad looks up as if he hopes an angel of God will come down and rescue him.
We sit down in the large living room that is filled with our new furniture “Um...Amber, sweetie, I’m sorry, but I’d like to talk to your father privately” says my mother quietly “Amber has as much of a right to be in this room as you, Kate!” flashes my father “It’s Ok, dad, I can leave” I say, hoping my parents won’t fight about it. I walk upstairs and go to my room, which is directly over the living room.
I kneel down on the floor and put my ear to the ground, “No, Kate! I need Amber in my life” I hear dad say “Mark, be sensible, you never spend any time with Amber as it is, I found out from Amber that no matter how many times she tries to talk to you, you push her away or say you are busy” replies my mom sharply “What?!” exclaims dad. “I need more time with Amber, Mark, I am moving up here, my boss said that we need someone to manage Walmart up here, and he gave me the job.” says my mom. I can tell that she is on the verge of tears. “Kate” my dad says quietly “Amber’s room is right above us” then I hear whispering and I can tell there is going to be a long discussion downstairs and they aren’t going to raise their voices again.
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An hour later I hear my parents' feet coming up the stairs. “Amber,” says my father “Your mother is going to fight for you, she wants to spend more than two months a year with you.” My dad looks terrible and like he’s just been shot by his best friend, he looks so sad that I couldn’t even bring myself to look at him.
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When I woke up this morning I knew what today was, the trial. I had a shower then dried my hair. I think about calling mom to tell her I don’t feel good, and don’t want to go to the trial. No, I can’t do that! I want to be able to spend more time with mom as well. So I went to my closet and pulled out a purple shirt and a sparkly black half-sweater. I chose my favorite pair of jeans and slipped on a pair of black flip-flops. Then I lay back on my bed, ‘Why me?’ I don’t want to have to think about this any more. I go downstairs to get breakfast and then I hear dad’s footsteps coming down the stairs. “Dear,” he says “huh?” I mumble quietly “We have to leave in half an hour” “Ok” I reply.
[Story Concludes In Part 3]







love your story
ASIA
can't wait to read part 3 of this story!
I really loved this story!
I hope this isn't a true story because it's sad.
awwww
I LOVE this story!!! can't wait to read # 3 in like 3 min!!! :) :) this is REALLY good!!!
It hard to think that her parent argue over her and she wants both of them I feel bad.
the same kind of thing happened to me i know what ur going through
mazin'
Oh poor Amber....
i hope its fictional.... :(
I would hate that if my parents fought over me. I feel bad for amber
That is so sad. Why are her parents fighting over Amber? Poor Amber!
Wow, I hope this won't be a true story, cause it would be devastating! Hopefully in the next part, it won't be anything to bad, because part 2 just changed the story up with the family all sad!
i really liked the story
I am happy I do not live in Ambers life.
I think this story is very good, but i think i am predicting a tragic ending. Man i cant wait for part 3! Its going to be really cool!
This is a really good story so far and really makes me want to keep reading! They stop at the worst times! the suspense is killing me!
I like this story
thats is so sad poor amber
i like this story
Oh my goodness that must have been so hard for her. I have been in court because of the adoption and trust me it is not fun.
I hope this isn't a true story. It would be sad if it was.
I just love your story.
I really liked it. Nice sory and you are right Hummingbird22 that thare are errors in punctuation. Otherwise well Done!!!!
yeah, sorry, Im not so good at punctuation, but I like writing.
I absolutely love this story, but I also have a sense that it might have a tragic ending. It really sounds like the mom and the dad might have a horrific breakup and the kid Amber... well it doesn't look good at all.
I noticed some things about the story written by Asia. In all it truly was an amazing story, but the punctuation choices could have been better.
pretty good story
I loved this story so far!!! WRITE PART III SOON!!! The only thing I thought could have been done better is the punctuation. Otherwise, it was AWESOME! :D
Me too.
I'm looking forward to Part III! I LOVE your writing style!
me 2
suspensful...
I love it. Can't wait till 3
Do part 3 it's good
is there a part 4?
Wow that was a sad story.
Great story makes you want to read more in the story versus not reading the rest! That was very good.
I like it:)
I love your story and I can't wait to read part 3!
did it say there was gonna be a part 3
part 2 is the only one i read. am very new.
Im glad you guys like it
Amazing description!!!
VERY NICE! Such a dramatic, creative story!
Great job! I read part one and I can't wait for the conclusion. Keep up the great work! :)
The ending should have been more
This isn't the ending
nice!
So far so good.