America At Last! - Part 2

Jun 3, 2012 By Abigail, 13

[Editor: Continued from Part 1 here]

German immigrants boarding a steamer in Hamburg, Germany; Courtesy Wikipedia

Papa groaned and hid his face in his hands.  “Did you remember our money?” 
Mama sighed, “Ja, it is sewn onto the hem of my dress.”  At this, Papa relaxed and told everyone to go to sleep.

Everybody slept fitfully and in the morning, nobody was rested.  Even so, they traveled all day through the forest. At the end of the day, as they were settling down for the night, Katherine asked, “Where are we going?”

“Mein Madchen, you are a girl of many questions,” Papa told her, “I will answer your question.  We are going to Moscow, where we will catch a train to Hamburg, Germany.” 

“Will we stay there?”
Nein, Katherine.  Then we will go to America!”
“America,” Katherine breathed.
“But,” said Papa, “But, if you want to get to America, you will have to be quiet.”  Katherine nodded solemnly.  “Now get some sleep.”  Papa lay down.

Day after day, they walked.  Night after night they slept in the cover of the woods.  Finally, after a week of walking, the Borgens family reached the outskirts of Moscow.  They bought train tickets and spent another five days traveling in a stinky, stuffy boxcar packed with other refugees.  The ride was terrible, but they lasted through it. 

“Ah, Hamburg!”  They had reached Hamburg, Germany, and Papa was basking in the wonder of it.  He breathed in deeply.  “Smell das Vaterland!”  Katherine just stared, wide-eyed, at the big city.  Papa looked at Mama with a suddenly serious face.  “We do have enough money for passage, don’t we?”

Ja,” Mama reassured, “but only just.”
Papa smiled, “Then let’s go buy our passage!”  He buoyantly bounced to the office.

Two days later, Papa, Mama, Katherine, and August were on their way to America.  For the first week, it was fun, but after the ship began to smell from all the immigrants packed into the tiny space, it began to be unbearable.  The worst part was when storms tossed the ship around.  The stench level rose because almost everyone was seasick.  The entire Borgens family was confined to their space because of seasickness.

Finally after eight months of continuous torture, the ship landed at Ellis Island.  As they stepped off the ship, Papa’s reaction was the same as in Germany.

“Ah!  America!” he stretched his arms wide.  “May 20, 1912!  I shall treasure this day forever.”  As they walked toward the immigrations office, he continued, “America!  Wo die Freiheit wird herrschen!  Where freedom shall reign!”

It had been three weeks since the Borgens’ had moved to their new apartment.  Papa’s sister had come to America a few years before, and she had helped them settle in. 

“I like it here,” Katherine said with a smile one day.
Ja, mein Madchen,” Mama had a smile on her face too.  “As I always say, Est ist keinen Verlust ohne einige kleine Verstarkung, there is no great loss without some small gain.”

Katherine’s smile disappeared, “I still wish sometimes that we were back at our old home in Russia.”
“Come now,” Mama put her hand under Katherine’s chin, “Smile for me, we’re in America at last.”   

 
ish   47 weeks ago

this is a great story and displays a lot of hardships and facts about immigration. I like the plot and the conflict. Are you thinking about adding more?

writergirl   47 weeks ago

no. do you think it needs more?

JENNAH H_C   49 weeks ago

:) Great and entertaining

tremere   50 weeks ago

This was an awsome story 6/8/12 12:46 PM

maryd   50 weeks ago

Great part two!!

maryg   50 weeks ago

I loved this story!

megand   50 weeks ago

This is really cool and interesting! i can't believe a teen wrote this

megand   50 weeks ago

This is really amazing! really fun and interesting

breannav   50 weeks ago

That was such a good story. I wish I would have read part one.

Editor   50 weeks ago

Breannav: You can find Part 1 HERE

emmae   50 weeks ago

That is the story of thousands who endure a long trip to America .

matthewd   50 weeks ago

good story kind of entertaining

Rachel Catherine   50 weeks ago

Great story!

adella   50 weeks ago

Was that Russian they kept speaking?

writergirl   50 weeks ago

they're speaking German

adella   50 weeks ago

thats cool. How do you know german? My sister knows russian and my mom knows german.

writergirl   50 weeks ago

i used Google Translate. ;)

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