Friendship

Feb 13, 2011 By Mridula, 14

Friendship is like a garden of flowers
Everything is so beautiful and rare
It can't become pure
Without tender and loving care

New flowers bloom every day
With colors so exotic and bright
Friendship is like a garden of flowers
And each day shines a new light

Friendship is the sweetest melody
Filled with happiness and joy
Friendship is a strong tie
That nothing can destroy

Friendship is like a rainbow
With a pot of gold at the end
For nothing can be better
To have an understanding friend
 

 
saiges   50 weeks ago

Friendship is such a powerfull thing, and i dont know what i would do without my friends! so this was a great poem!

Aaiz   1 year ago

Amazing poem!

Shizah   1 year ago

Very impressive. I loved it. KEEP IT UP! :)

I think it is a beautiful poem because it touched my heart :)

Shizah   1 year ago

I like your poem. I wish I had friends that suited your friends.... :(

sierrar   1 year ago

Great poem.

lydiaf   1 year ago

I don't really have friendship like that. Only at church and at ballet.

kenn   1 year ago

Great poem!
I understand everything clearly!

ashleym   1 year ago

great poem that expresses how great friendship is!

alundy   2 years ago

And it is a love poem about friends being nice to each other and caring for each other.

alundy   2 years ago

It seems like a good understanding of a friendship and a big pot of love and it will put a big smile on your face it is a very meaning poem of friendship it makes you want to say i am sorry

kinnane7   2 years ago

nice poem!

shadowdragon355 (not verified)   2 years ago

I love your poem! It's so meaningful true. AND you still made it rhyme. =)

Arjun   2 years ago

It seems as if you have a deep understanding of friendship. Very artistic similes!

Love the poem! I enjoyed reading it a lot.

Matthew14   2 years ago

Good job Mridula. I was able to understand this poem, something which is usually very hard to do.

zippyfire4444   2 years ago

Great Meaningful poem!!!!!!!!
Your best one yet, I love how you made it rhyme but still understandable.

Sammy02   2 years ago

I like these kind of 'understandable poems'. Some poets just make words so incomprehensible, as if they don't want readers to understand. Poetic language is like a whole new language to me, really!
But, I really like this poem. Keep up with the good writing!

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