I'm Always Looking At You Mama

Jul 25, 2012 By Greensalmon, 10

I’m always looking at you mama
All through the night
So then I get to see
When you turn left and right

Then you smile at me and wave
So then I wave back
You say it was a test
But not waving I lack

I’m always looking at you mama
When you think my eyes are closed
I’m always looking at you mama
When you never
Ever
KNOW

[Editor's note: We felt the author's explanation for the poem deserved to be mentioned here, as it makes the poem so much more meaningful. It describes her feelings for her mother who puts her to bed each night. In the second para, her mother tests if she is indeed asleep by waving at her -- and if she waves back, oops -- a sure giveaway!]

 
tabah   14 weeks ago

Awesome poem good work.

greta   23 weeks ago

hey!Greensalmon I love your poem & nice effort.

supernova   34 weeks ago

aw...this is the cutest thing...

tristanj   35 weeks ago

Great poem, I think I will Greensalmon

tessao   38 weeks ago

i can't imagine making million dollar painting like picasso

Rachel Catherine   42 weeks ago

I love my mommy! This was a fantastic poem, Greensalmon. I loved the explanation for it. I can't wait to read more of your work. :)

greensalmon   41 weeks ago

I love my mommy too!! I hope you like my other poems.

Rachel Catherine   41 weeks ago

I think I've read every other poem you've written. They are great, too! :)

greensalmon   41 weeks ago

Thanks!!

FARAHROX   42 weeks ago

I so love it it's the sweetest thing ever

Raptorman2012   42 weeks ago

Aww. This such a sweet poem!

greensalmon   42 weeks ago

Thanks! You should check out the other things iv'e made if you like this one.

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