Space For Improvement

Aug 2, 2012 By Jennah, 8

Keep improving and climbing new heights!

Nobody’s perfect
Nobody, that is
Although many would like to be

Nobody’s perfect
At even one little thing
Nobody’s perfect
At anything

Nobody’s perfect
I want to be
Nobody’s perfect
Learn that there is always space for improvement
And that that space would never go away

So try your best at everything
Starting from today,
And then, you see
You could be so close to there

It’s like a ride until perfect
Many obstacles in the way
Except it’s a never- ending ride

Although your tent may sit right next to it
Like a barrier you can never pass
Nobody’s perfect
But everyone wants to be

 
supernova   35 weeks ago

so sweet and so true!

Jenny (not verified)   38 weeks ago

I love your poem.

Olivia123   38 weeks ago

Nice job!

peterw   38 weeks ago

amazing similes

Ashley12   38 weeks ago

Pretty and Poetic! The picture also gose nicely with the theme. Five stars from me, Jennah!

rahilm   38 weeks ago

nice

diamond   38 weeks ago

good job Jennah

i loved your poem

ayeshaazra   38 weeks ago

good job Jennah!!

Girls Rule   39 weeks ago

Awesome Jennah!!!!,!!!,,!!"

Peter12   40 weeks ago

nice!!

Ria Shah   40 weeks ago

nice

Rishob   40 weeks ago

I really liked the meaning of the poem.

ish   40 weeks ago

Nice, I liked the picture and the poem.

maryd   41 weeks ago

I love your writing!

FARAHROX   41 weeks ago

Wow Jennah! That was really nice! I wanna go into space

Rachel Catherine   41 weeks ago

I loved that! The similes and metaphors you used were my favorite part. Good job,Jennah:)

JENNAH H_C   41 weeks ago

:D

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