A Surprise Birthday Party - Part 1

Feb 25, 2013 By Grace, 12

“This is not what I asked for!” I exploded. “I wanted the blue balloons over red, the streamers not confetti, and the blueberries instead of raisins! This is a nightmare!” I could feel my cheeks getting hotter by the minute. My blonde hair was sticking to my face as I stressed over this party that has to be perfect.

This surprise birthday party for Bridget is going to be a disaster. Not only will my friend be disappointed, but my party planning reputation will go down the drain.

"Cecile, the cake has arrived,” Pablo loudly announced as he strolled into the living room.

“Thank you Pablo. Is it marble cake, just like I asked for?” I inquired. I noticed that the frosting was swirled around the cake and ‘Happy Birthday Bridget’ was inscribed in big blue letters on the cake. It was perfect.

My cell phone started to ring. I almost answered until I saw the caller ID, Bridget. I quickly pressed ignore. Bridget and I are best friends but I promised I’d go to the mall with her and then ignored her. I needed to get her away from her brown, two-story house so I could plan her party. I still feel a little guilty because it’s her birthday, but she will understand in the end.

The voicemail said, “Hey Cecile, its Bridget. What happened to our plans? Why aren’t you responding to my calls? You do remember it’s my birthday, right? Ugh! Please just call me back now!”

This was the fifth time she has called and I can tell she is getting angry. I just picture her standing in the middle of Weathervane Mall with her bright green eyes full of anxiety, her brown hair in a messy bun, and with her favorite t-shirt on, screaming into her blackberry. I almost laughed out loud, even though I probably looked similar. I slipped a glance at the mirror. My blonde hair was falling out of my French braid, my blue eyes had bags underneath them, my shirt was covered in stains, and my throat ached from yelling all over the house.

This was not the usual Cecile.

 
christiant2   4 weeks ago

sweet

--doglover--   8 weeks ago

good story cant wait for part 2!

aniqa3036   8 weeks ago

:)

Tootifruit   9 weeks ago

That's great Grace! I love it!

loveandwisdom   9 weeks ago

where's part two?

RO   9 weeks ago

Bridget must be very mad,not getting called back from Cecile.Great job!

lesliem   10 weeks ago

can not wait for part 2

graceo   10 weeks ago

Thanks everybody! But remember, this is only part one, I'm sure the part two will be posted. There is more to the story

charlotte1   9 weeks ago

I read part 2!
It's awesome!

DJrockid   10 weeks ago

Cool!

charlotte1   10 weeks ago

I feel bad.

loveandwisdom   11 weeks ago

great job grace! it really shows cecile's stress

Kittycat   11 weeks ago

Oh i can so relate to Cecile! I know how it feels when nothing goes according to plans!

FuzzUzzle   11 weeks ago

I hate birthday parties. I never know what to do at them.

Good story, Grace :)

Ella   10 weeks ago

Yeah me too. And I hate planning them.

RO   9 weeks ago

it is pretty hard.

brookep   11 weeks ago

i wish that some body would do that kind of thing for me. i would be very happy. i have never had a suprize birthday party becuase my parence are to busy to plan one. but i geuss that i have learned to be ok with it because they planned one for my little sister but not for me. but i guess it is ok because i do not have time to have one planned. but i still do wish that my mom or dad would plan one for me. or even a freind that would be the best birthday ever. i would not want a birthday like that again because i would be so happy that it could last me for years.

sylviaf2   11 weeks ago

did she have a great brithday?

K (not verified)   11 weeks ago

Very good. But I wish it ha more of an ending.

graceo   10 weeks ago

there is more to the story! This is only part one.

chingling   11 weeks ago

Write more!

charlotte1   10 weeks ago

Yeah you should write more.

Charlotte 888 (not verified)   11 weeks ago

Did she have a good birthday?

Ella   11 weeks ago

good job! i feel sorry for Bridget.

supernova   11 weeks ago

Nice job :)

Tryn28   11 weeks ago

hard.

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