Through The Magical Forest - Part 2

Jul 3, 2012 By Abigail, 13

Genesis directed the small torch that she had created up to where the glint was visible. It was a small golden key! Genesis started to climb. She reached the branch where the key was and unbound it from the branch. Jumping from branch to branch, she started to climb down. Quickly she realized the branches stopped ten feet from the ground. The other branches had vanished. How was she going to get down?

Genesis thought quickly. Then she had an idea. She started to pull leaves off the branches by the handful and throwing them to the ground. When she had thrown down enough to make a pile, she positioned herself and jumped, landing in the pile of leaves. She hurriedly ran to the gate, stuck the key in the lock, and turned it. The Golden Gate opened with squeaks and creaks. She rushed through.

Genesis sprinted to the next obstacle – a giant hedge. One look at it told her that she could not climb it. Genesis hunted along the length of the hedge for a spot to climb through. When she found one, she stuck her hand through but pulled it out quickly. The hedge was full of thorns. Genesis peeked in. She was about to pull her head out when she spotted a small rusty box. Carefully, she put her hand in and grabbed the box. Slowly Genesis opened the box. Inside was a single roll of parchment. She unrolled the parchment.

This is what it said:
“The next obstacle targets
Your weakness: So beware!
But first you must follow
The path marked with care.”

So there was a marked path to follow. But where was it? Genesis looked to her left and right. As she looked to her right, a white arrow appeared pointing into the foliage.

[Concludes in Part 3] 

 
tabah   9 weeks ago

Love it.

estherk   35 weeks ago

Ong! That is so cool!!

Peter12   41 weeks ago

Nice!!

AidenS   44 weeks ago

This one is good too!

Raptorman2012   44 weeks ago

I wonder what her weakness is and what the obstacle is...

Thor   45 weeks ago

are you done?

writergirl   45 weeks ago

no, they're just not publishing it for some reason.

Clara Roberts   45 weeks ago

this is a awesome story!

Ria Shah   46 weeks ago

I feel like i'm in the story

marian winslow   46 weeks ago

i like it!

JENNAH H_C   46 weeks ago

i love love love it Abigail!

Rachel Catherine   46 weeks ago

Did you make up this whole story and the poem yourself, Abigail? It's really good and creative! :)

writergirl   46 weeks ago

yeah, I did. the funny thing about the rhyme is that it just came to me right away.

Rachel Catherine   45 weeks ago

That's cool! :) Can't wait for Part III.

adella   46 weeks ago

Are there only three parts?
I like your tale!
It feels mystic and magical,
You should put it up for sale!

adella   46 weeks ago

I like the picture!

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