NO!!! That would be horrible! If the government had a weapon like that in their hands then we would all be doomed!Simple every day safety would be nearly impossible to guarantee. Human privacy would be compromised. It would be a disaster!
That would have been an amazing contest to win!!
I really hope so too. Vaccinations tend to do more bad then good.
I enjoyed the story, however i think if you had used a less conversational tone it would have been more touching.You could have wrote it in a distant way in the begining and then jumped in to connect with the audience at the end when you realized you werent going to wake up (or rather that you were never sleeping). That would have ended with a more dramatic effect. I really did enjoy it, but you asked for critiques! I'm no hater!
I LOVE IT!
I am going to die my hair neon green, wear all black clothes and paint my face like a skeleton! It's going to be creepy!!
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