Thanksgiving poem

Nov 16, 2014 By Deepa Gopal
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Thanksgiving Day is approaching in the US. Whether or not you live in the US, it may be a good time to think of people, things or events that you are thankful for. So.. how about you think of a short poem in celebration of anything you are really thankful for.

The most creative 3 entries will be declared winners.


The 3 winners are: El-Miracle Akpan, basimm, Lucia.

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|E-Miracle Akpan|Lucia|basimm||

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Lauren T's picture
Lauren T March 29, 2015 - 12:50am
I'll never win any contests! I always lose when I think I'm going to win!
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Lauren T March 4, 2015 - 9:18pm

It started from God's faithful pilgrims,
Traveled in Mayflower fair,
They arrived in winter time,
And illness was in the air.

But good old Squanto came to help,
And he taught them many things,
They searched for mussels on the beach,
And proclaimed the angel sings.

They had a merry feast of thanks,
The turkey was caught and roasted,
The mussels were shelled and boiled,
And the berries were as good as boasted.

So give thanks to our ancestors,
Many years ago,
Who battled the wind and cold,
With snowflakes and the snow.

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andrewd2 January 26, 2015 - 2:38pm

Cool

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sammy138 January 24, 2015 - 7:03pm

i will never win!!!!

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jamiel December 17, 2014 - 12:03pm

FAMILY
FRIENDS
BOYS and GIRLS
MOMMY'S DADDY'S
DOGS AND CATS.

ALL OF THESE THINGS I'M THANKFUL FOR, THAT'S ONLY A LITTLE, I'll SAY A LITTLE MORE,

SCHOOL AND CAMP,
READING AND WRITING,
MATH AND ALGEBRA,

THESE ARE WHAT I'm THANKFUL FOR!!!

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matthewc7 December 17, 2014 - 12:00pm

Thanks giving thanks giving it's the best

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bowlingirl December 12, 2014 - 2:36pm

thanksgiving is fun

i am going to win

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jm642 December 9, 2014 - 8:59am

I AN THANKFUL for being with my family for all of them if they need my help to for anything they need

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phineus11122223... December 8, 2014 - 1:11pm

thanks for the giving love is for giving
we give always bring good do the deed of
happynes such a fun celabration.

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Lucia December 3, 2014 - 6:34am
The Giving of Thanks The Giving of Thanks, as my dad would say, Where people can get carried away, With what they are thankful for from day to day. People are thankful for everthing, From Balls to being able thankful to sing, To Clothes and turkey on the table, To a mattress with a label. After we say what where thankful for, We get to the food like a new open door, We eat turkey, stuffing, rolls too, Then we get fresh and new, When we hear there is dessert, too. We rush to get the pumpkin pie with whipped cream, It all tastes like a dream, The fluffy whipped cream, and the soft pumpkin pie, That is all we need for dessert, to try. Then we are all stuffed and full, So we go home, looking like a mule. The Giving of Thanks, as my dad would say, Where people can get carried away, With what we are thankful for from day to day.
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basimm December 1, 2014 - 3:37pm

I'm doing a second separate poem.

On thanksgiving I hear we shouldn't eat turkey,
I guess the new trend now is Beef Jerkey!

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basimm December 1, 2014 - 3:31pm

Sure its great to have all that food,
but what really puts you in a better mood.
Is having quality time with your family,
come on why don't you join me.

All we say is pass the stuffin',
and come on give me a muffin.
give me some of that gravy,
let's stop this together you and me.

We can stop this all together,
come on quickly get your brother,
and don't forget also your mother.

We can stop this together why don't see,
life is a song and we have to sing in harmony.
If we just combine and attach,
we all have weaknesses that we can all patch.

As you see we can make a change,
we can make this world rearrange.
We can make this world a better place,
and make all the wrongs just erase.

Be happy with the time with your family,
we all wish that is how it's supposed to be.
For it is sad when they have to leave,
we just have to be strong and believe.

For Thanksgiving is coming to an end,
treat everybody just like a friend.
Just remember don't abuse the time with your with relatives,
because everyone is sensitive.

We should all give all our thank,
because if we don't we'll realize that our joy just shrank.
Always be thankful for at least 1 or 2,
or else you would really be feeling blue.

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zoea January 22, 2015 - 2:45pm

Nice poem Basim... Ignore the other guy. It was a rude comment.

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sainh November 24, 2014 - 4:05pm

I hope I win ( which will not happen). :(

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Rachel Catherine November 29, 2014 - 11:10am

Don't put yourself down like that! Always have confidence in your work. As long as you put forth your best effort, there is no reason why you shouldn't have just as good a chance as everyone else to win.

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sophiar3 November 24, 2014 - 1:28pm

I'm really happy today
For the Thanksgiving Day
Hip-Hip Hooray in every way
Coming together on one happy way
Let's make this one day
The cream dela cream...

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kristopherl November 24, 2014 - 1:18pm

I an thankful in so many ways
being nice every day,
It brings me weak
to the typical peak.

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kristopherl November 24, 2014 - 1:15pm

turkey, turkey is so great, it brings up no hate, you can eat it very late

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sophieh November 24, 2014 - 12:39pm

pumpkins are orange and turkeys are brown pie is sweet and so are you thanksgiving is coming and families are too so come to dinner to stuff your self silly then play some football then play some games have a great thanks giving to all and to all a great thanksgiving.

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brandyl November 24, 2014 - 8:59am

You get ready to play
The men go out to shoot the chicken they have fun to
Then men berry the turkey and put red coals on top
Everyone eats till tree bellies get full yum they say
Everyone eats then they go home
Most of all your with your family thats what matters!

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dayal November 22, 2014 - 11:03am

Give Thanks for a feast

Give thanks for the food
mostly the pies
stuffing my face my face and feasting my eyes
give thanks for the colors
the green, red and brown,
oranges, whites, try not to drown!
Give thanks for for the hot, heated, hearty dessert,
depends on your favorites,
but no pies in the desert!
and finally, give thanks for me,
That such a beautiful thing came in to this world
so kind and pretty,
you're looking at the future first girl president!
and instead of thanksgiving,
it'll be christmas everyday!

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evenstar13 November 20, 2014 - 1:33pm

Give Thanks
By Joey S. Ooi, 12

Where the heart is,
The home is there,
They say,
But the home is more,
Far more than that,
Tis a stronghold of comfort
And peace
A place I’m free to be me
No restriction,
Instead,
Understanding stands sole
Freely flows the help only
The home
Can offer
Smoothly falls the ease
Tis the real home,
A place to be me
Three places in life,
Everyone has
Home place,
Work place,
Fun place,
My home has all three.

Throughout the days,
People weave in,
Then out,
My life
Imagine a lonely life,
No people
That’s why I’m thankful
For them
Relationship is like a rose
Blooms gracefully,
Grows steadily,
Till nothing exceeds the fair blushes
Of the flower
Watch,
And I grow,
Sprinkled with the water of friendship
Even the passing strangers,
They teach a lesson of life
Whether their responses to others,
Or their inobservance of
The world ‘round them
But more important,
The family and friends with me
The examples they set,
One more pearl presented to me
Rely on these,
Then learn to be reliable for others,
I mature,
I stand-
Taller under their support for me

Skills,
Abilities,
Fertilizer of life
Who can live without them?
Tis a new door to open,
A new song to sing,
Finally opened gates
Opened to new opportunities
Being able to work with hands
A gift of abilities
Being able to express one self
Able to sing for joy,
And being freed from
Chains of incapability
Limitless,
Boundless,
A new meadow to roam,
Another ocean to adventure,
To conquer
Only done with skill
Maneuvering competence
A radical change in life
Refreshing river for me
Bound until the skill
Relived for me

The rocks of the earth,
Beneath us,
Always there when I awake
For granted,
It was taken
Look to the stars,
He knows them by name
Sweep my eyes over the sea,
Unknown,
Vast,
Yet mapped by Him on His hand
The mountain trembles at His voice,
The oceans shudder at his touch
See this gentle King,
Everywhere
His mark,
Fingerprint in my world,
Mark in my everyday life
Life has no meaning
Without the glory of G-d
Shining through the trees
Remember,
All those who hear,
That human are feeble,
So small,
Unworthy of the life
Given to us by the King
G-d breathed life stirs amongst man

All things will change,
Nothing stays the same,
Wear down,
Advancements,
Updates,
New trends
We change the ways we
Live
We change the ways we
See
We change the way we
Grow
Always moving,
Never stopping
A new method,
A better way to spend
Time
In mixture
Blur of colors
Where is one that moves slow enough?
How can I to see it?
Reach out,
To touch,
Then gone,
Tis no more there
Not a trace
Turn around,
See it there,
Realize how time
Flies
The world is developing
Quickly
Efficiently
Keep up,
Try hard
Collapse

I say
Try harder to catch the changes
Exhausted,
Nowhere to start,
Not a place
Even landscape changes daily
One will stay the same.
One will stand still
One will wait for me to
Follow
G-d
My father
Quicken paces
In Him
Find restoration,
Revolution
Resurrection
He will continue to stay the same
Yesterday- Today – Forever
He is there for me.
Don’t need fads of life
Need not catch the flying styles
Only
Remember,
He stays the same forever.

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Note this,
Reader
My freestyle
Symbolizes
Ease
I’m writing at home
Stanza two is wordy,
Words need friends
Stanza three,
Most poetic,
Symbolizing skill
Stanza four,
Most thankful,
G-d is wonderful
Stanza five
Quick paced
Short lines
To show
Quick movement
Stanza six,
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Exhaustion from thinking
About the poem,
Yet glad
I expressed
My thought
And this one,
Reader
Just a note

SOrry this is sooo long!
i was carried off

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maddiee December 20, 2014 - 8:56am

i read the whole thing!!! you are going to win!! :):):):)

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Mhlearning December 3, 2014 - 4:59pm

WOW!! you are right it is super long!

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willt November 18, 2014 - 9:08am

Thanksgiving Thanksgiving full of joy,
Thanksgiving Thanksgiving with all the thanks,
for the people we love and the food we eat,
the clothes on our back and with a roof over our head,
Thanksgiving Thanksgiving for family and all

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sarah123456 November 17, 2014 - 4:28pm

When a star comes out in the deep dark night,
I always wonder what my relatives are like,
I know some of them have been an a war,
And some of them even held a sword,
Having such brave relatives is great,
I am very thankful for they're big ace.

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zoea November 23, 2014 - 2:52pm

wow that's amazing :O

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sainh November 17, 2014 - 4:24pm

Thanksgiving
The bare white trees all bare
The families gathering joyfully
The laughs and giggles from little ones

Thanksgiving
The people walking here and there
The turkey sitting on the table
The turkey welcoming everyone to the table

Thanksgiving
The thankfulness of what you've done
The bits and pieces of rich thankfulness sitting on plates
The plates are bare and go to sleep

Thangsgiving
The gate to winter where the snow falls
The start of a new beginning
The day where you can be thankful

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El-Miracle Akpan November 17, 2014 - 9:31am

I am thankful for the day,
Being happy and content in every way,
Having someone to love,
Being watched by heaven from above,
I am thankful for the life i live,
That I have something to give,
Everything to me is a blessing.

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sydneym5 January 29, 2015 - 1:45pm

love yours its sweet and special!